oh wow.....do you know Hiral ?....slowly slowly you are moving towards the perfection(hey hey hey....calm down... :) i'm not saying that you are imperfect but i feel you are doing better and better.... ).  yes,..it really comes across with a good right, to the point of the matter. And this one reminds me something i wrote in past....hey...dont worry...i'm not going to post those blah blah blah here. :) but it has similar meaning...ummm....i mean...its like moment melted in perpetual mind; body and soul; from the horizon of reality and virtuality. witnessing magnanimous grace in every object that flooded hopelessly despairing vision….every moment is like never ending heartbeats; bonded perpetually with virtuality …do you know Hiral, 'tik tik' or say 'the moment' of life is wound but once...and clouded by life's cruel inhuman side....and....ok ok ok ...huh,,,I write too long... :) 
again...you are doing very beautiful thing in life...so let it flowing....keep writing.......